Hello, and welcome to this weeks Blog Chat. I'm glad that you have a few minutes to stop by after visiting with Victoria Barbour on her website http://victoriabarbour.com/
This weeks challenge was for everyone to create a piece of "flash fiction", not more than 150 words, using the words scarf, chocolate and candle. I decided to dig a little deeper into one of my secondary characters from my latest completed manuscript, "Trying for Par". Adara is a love interest of my hero Donovan, but she breaks his heart, and he is determined never to fall in love again... until he meets our heroine, Tiffany Jones. But, that's enough preamble.
Here is my 150 word flash fiction - I hope that you enjoy it.
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Adara
wound the scarf around her head, and stepped out into a London fog that
threatened to undo all of Philippe’s hard work. She waved farewell to her
favorite hairdresser as he stood on the stoop, blowing a kiss. She laughed, and
pulled her jacket collar tighter against the damp.
The
fragrance of warm, melted chocolate sliced through the misty air, and she paused.
Where was it coming from? Of course, that cute little pastry shop on the corner.
Careful not to spear her new stiletto heels between the cobblestones, Adara
picked her way across the street to admire the display of pastries. A glance
toward the darkening sky confirmed that she had no time to stop and savor one
of the éclairs.
As she
hurried along the narrow alley, the gaslights planted along the street
glittered like tiny candles, pricking the early evening gloom. She was now
officially late.--------------------------------------
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Great little story Mikki! Love things that leave you wondering what's next.
ReplyDeleteThank you! That's what I was hoping people would think..
DeleteI can just hear her heals clicking on the cobblestones. Nice imagery...and now I want an éclair.
ReplyDeleteI know, right? Love those chocolate eclairs!
DeleteBeautiful picture you drew there
ReplyDeleteThank you so much - I love to try and put the reader in the scene.
DeleteNice- I was there, on the street with her.
ReplyDeleteThanks! I love to be in the moment with a character.
DeleteLovely imagery!
ReplyDeleteThank you! Loved your post as well.
DeleteCan totally see that playing out Mikki - love it!
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteI loved your imagery!!! Fantastic flash fiction!!!
ReplyDeleteThank you for the comment - I had fun writing this.
DeleteI think every sense got involved with this one. Great job!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much!
DeleteVery nice piece Mikki, and I like your idea of using it to flesh out a secondary character. I may try that too. ;)
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